August 21, 2009

Morning Cup of Quiet Mind

My first 55, go easy on me:)


She stirred the sweetener in the cup of coffee, watching it dissolve and swirl. Her mind swirls with thoughts at the same rapid pace. She wonders if quiet will ever come and peace will dissolve her pain. He glances her way as she puts down the spoon, it is quiet and the sweetener is dissolved.

12 comments:

Susan DeAngelis said...

Right on! You should be proud. I haven't attempted on yet :)

Sue

Madison said...

I really like how you brought those the stirring of the sweetener and thoughts together. Nice job.

Mona said...

its good that you have control over the mind's mess, in whichever way you can!

Great 55ve!

CJ said...

Excellent 55. No one would guess you are a newbie.

Find my Flash 55 for this week HERE.

hope said...

You swirled the words together nicely...especially for your first 55. Nice job!

Tall Kay said...

Excellent first Friday 55! You're a natural! I just love the title! It's kinda fun, huh?

G-Man said...

Go easy?
Fat Chance....!!!
Where and the HELL have you been Girl???
WOW!!!
I really really liked this 55 Mom!
I hope you had fun with the challenge and creativity.
Please join in the Friday Funfest next week as well...Thanks
Galen

Just Be Real said...

Perfect mixture. Thanks for sharing your '55' blessings...

Mom of Opiate Addict said...

Thanks for all the nice comments, and it was pretty fun. I don't think I have gotten out of my head and done a creative project in some time, very healing as well. Thanks!!

Her Big Sad said...

That was cool! I love the analogy - you did a great job!!

:)

Athena said...

WOW... that was good. I am impressed by the 55-ers... Not just the writing, but remembering to do it & on Friday... lol

I hope you do more! I will continue to lurk and admire and maybe one accidental Friday...

Syd said...

Good for you. Glad that you posted it.