October 29, 2009

Stumbling in the Dark--Friday Flash 55


She tried not to make a sound after hearing the crash.  Slowly she made her way in the dark out of the bedroom towards the kitchen.  Unable to breathe she quickly moved around the corner of the kitchen doorway and turned on the light.  There he was, her husband, eating all of the Halloween candy!

Every Friday write a poem, story or limerick of 55 words, no more, no less, and then report to the G-man!!

14 comments:

fickleinpink said...

i imagine his face when you caught him eating 'em up!

happy 55!

Larry said...

Hello I posted my flash 55 on Galens site and noticed that your wanting to learn how to post a link. I went ahead and created a tutorial just for you. If you go to my site I explain it so you can learn how. Below you'll find my link for the tutorial created just for you.
Thank You
Larry @ This blog Of Mine.
Tutorial is Here

Hootin' Anni said...

LOL....this is FANGtastic.

Have a terrorific Halloween tomorrow---

My 55 is a two-parter this week...

Trick or Treats HERE

Gin said...

Ha, ha!!!! Oh this was hilarious!!!

Brian Miller said...

yeah i'd probably get hit...playfully...maybe...things that go bump in the night. great 55!

mine is up!

Dr.John said...

Been there and got caught. Remarkable 55. You sure you weren't hiding in our kitchen?

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

Chef Kar said...

Rat bastard! Hope he left the chocolates :-)

Have a good weekend. I hope that you have some peace when your son comes home. Expectations are a funny thing. My sponsor tells me, "the higher your expectation, the lower your serenity". It has been a difficult lesson, but well served when I keep it in mind.

Hugs to you,

Karis

You'll find 55 ~ Skipping Stones posted.

Alice Audrey said...

Hah! Caught him red-handed.

Great 55!

Syd said...

Funny....I really like this happy 55.

Prayer Girl said...

First, welcome to my blog. I always love hearing from new bloggers when they comment/become followers. It's exciting.

I loved your 55. Great surprise ending.

PG

G-Man said...

BUSTED!!!!
Excellent Halloween 55 MOM..
Thank you so much for this fine contribution.
Glad to see you in the Friday Funfest once again..
Have a Dry, Safe, and Kick-Ass Week-End...G

Susan at Stony River said...

ROFL! Sounds like our house!
Happy Halloween!

Barbara(aka Layla) said...

Good one! That was not the ending I was expecting :)

cat said...

Funny Stuff!